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Thursday, 14 June 2018
Sunday, 10 June 2018
Term 2 Writing Sample - Persuasive Speech
My speech.
I like the way I had a good structure for my speech
I like the way I spoke fluently and clear
I need to work on action and props
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Monday, 28 May 2018
Maori Sayings Around The Classroom.
TERM 2
SHARING OUR MAORI LEARNING
We are learning to recognise, understand, and use some less common
classroom vocabulary.
classroom vocabulary.
We are learning to pronounce māori kupu correctly
We are learning to use simple sentences
‘Anei’ (Here is),
‘Kei hea’ (Where is/are),
‘taku’ (my – singular)
The statements and questions with translations from my video:
1- kei hea taku penerāku? (where is my pencil?)
2- amei taku penerākau. (here is my pencil.)
3- kei hea taku apu? (where is my apple?)
4- anei tō apu. (here is your apple.)
5- anei kutikuti. (here is scissors.)
2- amei taku penerākau. (here is my pencil.)
3- kei hea taku apu? (where is my apple?)
4- anei tō apu. (here is your apple.)
5- anei kutikuti. (here is scissors.)
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Sunday, 20 May 2018
WEEK 3 REFLECTION
Senior Constable Tony is a forensic Officer who came and visited us to explain forensic science...
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| He showed some of his tools |
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| He showed his ferensic kit |
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| He showed us how to cast footprints |
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| He showed us how to brush off handprints |
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| He told us how to get footprints out of the ground |
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| He is dusting his handprint |
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| Hes peeling off his finger print |
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| his tool kit |
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Wednesday, 9 May 2018
Detective
Hello there My name is detective Sausage, a level 4 detective partnered with Nicole ward also a level 4 detective. me and Nicole have seen nothing like this crime the date happened was the 29th of April 2018. I observed the scene at 21:20 Monday 30th of April 2018 the day after it happened. the place of crime was at kaiapoi north school in Tiwai, the creative cave.
My evidence was phenomenal. there were white floury hands on a top cupboard at the other end of the fish tank. By the rooms 18 and 19 doors there was a glass with pink red lipstick on the rim so my guess is that they drank maybe they water. On the closest table to the glass there was an orange vest, would have checked for a name but I couldn't. And someones been to hong kong because there was a coin on the same table as the vest. A sand coloured had with a black strip around the middle sitting on the floor right next to the coin and vest. On another table was a very gross lift bottle, thinking it was empty by a snapped ruler. Right next to that was a fallen chair with a note saying " Ha Ha Payback for anoying me ". The most outragious thing was the fish tank that belonged to Miss T was gone as soon as I saw this I thausht to myself somethings fishy around here! Some stones and a plant was the last remaining peices of it. A red water bottle that people won at cross country was becide the remaining parts of the fish. A muddy footpring that Nicole thinks is a converse. There was blue paint withletters saying "Rea". And a peice of paper with fingerprints! There was a white hand on a black wall next to a muddy footprint on a desk. By the white floury white hands on the top cupboard was a red Nescafe cup with some black tea in it. Fingerprints on the TV witch the teachers may have touched or the criminal? there was also paper on the floor
My top suspect is Miss bayless because she always weres lipstick and she has that hat (i think). She wheres converse that the footprint mach.
My evidence was phenomenal. there were white floury hands on a top cupboard at the other end of the fish tank. By the rooms 18 and 19 doors there was a glass with pink red lipstick on the rim so my guess is that they drank maybe they water. On the closest table to the glass there was an orange vest, would have checked for a name but I couldn't. And someones been to hong kong because there was a coin on the same table as the vest. A sand coloured had with a black strip around the middle sitting on the floor right next to the coin and vest. On another table was a very gross lift bottle, thinking it was empty by a snapped ruler. Right next to that was a fallen chair with a note saying " Ha Ha Payback for anoying me ". The most outragious thing was the fish tank that belonged to Miss T was gone as soon as I saw this I thausht to myself somethings fishy around here! Some stones and a plant was the last remaining peices of it. A red water bottle that people won at cross country was becide the remaining parts of the fish. A muddy footpring that Nicole thinks is a converse. There was blue paint withletters saying "Rea". And a peice of paper with fingerprints! There was a white hand on a black wall next to a muddy footprint on a desk. By the white floury white hands on the top cupboard was a red Nescafe cup with some black tea in it. Fingerprints on the TV witch the teachers may have touched or the criminal? there was also paper on the floor
My top suspect is Miss bayless because she always weres lipstick and she has that hat (i think). She wheres converse that the footprint mach.
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Saturday, 5 May 2018
Week 1 Reflection
What happened (the crime)?
there where fingerprints on the wall and cuboard, fishtank was gone, notes, glass with lipstick on rim, vest on the same table as a honkong coin, hat by the coin, bottles, footprints, ruler
What was the evidence?
fingerprints, fishtank gone, note, glass with lipstick on rim, vest, coin, hat, bottles, footprints, ruler
Take a picture of one thing you’ve done around your detective work e.g. crime
description writing, fingerprint analysis, handwriting analysis:
description writing, fingerprint analysis, handwriting analysis:
Who do you suspect is the culprit and why?
miss bayliss because she wears lipstick often and she relates to vthe handwriting analasis
What are two positives about this week and one thing you want to work on for next week?
the 2 positives for me would be the maths rotactions have changed and the crime sciene was interesting and this week i need to work on my involement because i have not been involved in much as in putting my hand up or saying something in my group
This week we got back to school from the holidays and saw there was a crime
scene in our Creative Cave. On investigation, we found that Miss Turner’s fish tank had been stolen!
scene in our Creative Cave. On investigation, we found that Miss Turner’s fish tank had been stolen!
I arrived at school and I had a huge question what happened well miss t fish tank was gone and it only had a few pebbles left on the counter and a plant even fingerprints it was someone who knows the sicuraty camera code to turn off.
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